tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9104678730176687014.post6371875990384945344..comments2014-12-12T18:07:42.274-05:00Comments on Seminar in Composition : Abbey's Anti-Kantian PerspectiveAdamhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16302919444091859459noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9104678730176687014.post-45047048309400799082014-09-07T10:56:48.594-04:002014-09-07T10:56:48.594-04:00Jessi
I felt that your essay had good flow to it. ...Jessi<br />I felt that your essay had good flow to it. However there were a lot of parts of the essay which did not connect to the actual prompt itself. A lot of the points you made were interesting, however they were not expanded upon in enough detail. You could have expanded upon the points you made in your conclusion and put more emphasis on how Abbey would be able defy Kant's theory. Overall I felt that you had unique points, they just needed to be focused upon and connected with the actual prompt. <br />Jayani Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06890113975458890393noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9104678730176687014.post-88788120104909403772014-09-06T13:28:24.389-04:002014-09-06T13:28:24.389-04:00I don't have much to add to what I and others ...I don't have much to add to what I and others said in class. Your grasp of Kant is pretty good, and your basic viewpoint on what Kant means to Abbey is fine. Where you fall short is in execution - too much wordiness in the first few paragraphs coupled with limited examples from Abbey means that your argument isn't very convincing or developed, although your basic approach is perfectly fine.Adamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16302919444091859459noreply@blogger.com