Meaghan Duffy
12/10/14
Final Project
Professor Adam Johns
The Importance of Defying Social Norms
When in history did individuality
become more frowned upon than celebrated?
When did society begin putting those who are so obviously different from
the common man so close to the bottom of the social pyramid? Who was given the power to judge the
importance of another human being?
Obvious individuality is a rarity and brilliance that should be
celebrated and desired, keeping this basic world fresh and consistently
advancing.
In Yellow Woman
and a Beauty of the Spirit, Leslie Marmon Silko discusses the way of the
Laguna Pueblo in New Mexico, the way they value the individual as an important
part of society and how they judge the person on behavior rather than external
beauty. Silko says, “Younger people,
people my parents’ age, seemed to look at the world in a more modern way. The modern way includes racism (Silko,
10).” Such a dramatic swap in values can
most relevantly be attributed back to the early 20th century post
World War I to the era infamously known as The Roaring Twenties. “Before
World War I the country remained culturally and psychologically rooted in the
nineteenth century, but in the 1920s America seemed to break its wistful
attachments to the recent past and usher in a more modern era (Zeitz).” After a wartime recession caused by severe
hyperinflation around the world, the economy boomed in the decade following
WWI. A Progressive Era accompanied by
advances in technology, growth in big business and a thrive in the banking
system created an economic boom leaving Americans with much disposable income
to spend on luxuries. During this time
the credit card was invented allowing people to spend money they didn’t have on
everything they wanted but didn’t need. The
1920’s will forever be defined as, “…flappers and dance halls, movie palaces
and radio empires, and Prohibition and speakeasies (Zeitz).” During this time dresses became shorter,
brighter and lighter. New fabrics were experimented with and “designer brands”
became a desire and indicator or worth and wealth. The risk takers of society were born during
this time. “Flappers prized style over substance,
novelty over tradition, and pleasure over virtue (Ferentinos).” They cut their hair, sporting the bob and
shortened their dresses above the knee.
They flirtatiously danced with men and participated in illegal drug
use. These women were rebels against
their expectation to settle down and stay hidden housewives, and they used
fashion and trend to get the message across.
Since this time, how a woman or man presents him or herself externally
sends a strong message about wealth, worth, values and morals.
The Pueblo
people, “looked at the world very differently; a person’s appearance and
possessions did not matter nearly as much as a person’s behavior. For them, a person’s value lies in how the
person interacts with other people, how that person behaves toward the animals
and the earth (Silko, 10).” According to
them, all things, all people, all animals were created equal by a single
creator; all things were related and considered siblings. There was no proper and improper, favored or
disfavored because everything in this universe was created for an intended
balance that was necessary to create harmony and peaceful flow. Silko, as a young child, was taught by her
grandmother to be proud of her confidence and strength because such qualities
made her beautiful and valuable. “To the
Pueblo way of thinking, the act of comparing one living being with another was
silly, because each being or thing is unique and therefore incomparability
valuable because it is the only one of its kind (Silko, 11).” Among their culture, there was no social
ladder that could be influenced by choice of clothing. The Pueblo people valued those physical
differences that would be pitied in our culture. What we would ostracize, they would
celebrate. “Persons born with
exceptional physical or sexual differences were highly respected and honored
because their physical differences gave them special positions as mediators
between this world and the spirit world (Silko, 12).” Silko tells a story about the hunchbacked
medicine man who was seen as a universal healer and of much importance in their
culture; he was not labeled as disabled and less capable as he would have been
in modern American culture.
Further
Directions:
-Further
research on The Roaring Twenties and the era of fashion and brand names to add
into my writing.
-May add in
a paragraph about the way beginning of racism starting with the non-english
European immigrants.
-A long
paragraph on Lewontin and the removal of physical beauty and gender roles and
how it has affected social norms.
-Paragraph
on counterargument intertwined with personal opinion and my argument against
counter argument
(Clearly
this paper is far from complete. I must
still do more investigation to properly introduce and attack a counterargument. I still must edit and add several paragraphs/pages. This is simply what I
had done and organized as of the due date.)
Work Cited:
Ferentinos, Susan. "Flapper." The
Ultimate History Project. N.p., n.d. Web. 03 Dec. 2014.
Zeitz,
Joshua. "The Roaring Twenties." The Gilder Lehrman Institute of
American History. N.p., n.d. Web. 05 Dec. 2014.
Silko, Leslie
Marmon. "Yellow Woman and a Beauty of the Spirit: Essays on Native
American Life Today." The Antioch Review 54.3 (1996): 364. Web.
Question: Do you think I should include the beginnings of racism into my argument and how that has shaped opinion or should I stick with physical deformities and fashion as focussed on in Yellow Woman and a Beauty of the Spirit?
ReplyDeleteIn America, at least, I don’t think much of anyone would openly disagree with your first paragraph. Now, maybe we’re all hypocrites (as Silko would doubtless argue), and don’t support *true* individualism. But there’s no need to begin with an argument that, at least as presented, everyone will agree with.
ReplyDeleteI’m not opposed to talking about the roaring twenties. But why do you assume that the roaring twenties (as we understand it through “mainstream" history - that is, history especially focused on urban, middle-class white people) has something to do with changing values on the Laguna pueblo? If this claim isn’t important, why make it? If it is important, you need to be able to say something about how the Laguna pueblo changed during this time period. "Since this time, how a woman or man presents him or herself externally sends a strong message about wealth, worth, values and morals. “ — This sentence hints at how you might find the 20s important to Silko’s argument. But I need to put it all together myself. You aren’t explaining how the changing values of the Laguna are rooted in the apparent externalization of our identities in the 20s.
Your Silko section is just a summary at this point, rather than an argument which uses Silko.
At this point, this seems like an early draft of an essay on Silko and her understanding of beauty & individuality versus an idea of beauty & individuality which you attribute to 20s culture. The idea isn’t bad, but the execution will be demanding. Your idea is starting to show through, but most of what’s here isn’t making a coherent argument - it’s just a long summary of material that doesn’t seem terribly relevant.
Think about your goal here. Are you simply using Silko to challenge certain inbred notions which you trace back to the 20s? If so, are you arguing that we should think and behave more like the Laguna once did? That’s not a bad idea, but you need to focus on that, then, rather than beating around the bush.
That’s my guess at what you’re up to here. But whether I’m right or wrong, you need to focus on the argument *you* want to make, and not get so bogged down in summarization of material which may or may not be relevant.
Also, in answer to your direct question - if you can relate racism to fashion and deformit, I think it's fine (and this can be done - especially by researching the skin-lightening treatments that many Black women of, say, the 1920s subjected themselves to), but I'm not sure that it really helps your focus.