Jonathan Lee
Seminar in Composition
Dr. Adam Johns
September 17, 2014
Prompt: At various points throughout Desert
Solitaire, Abbey claims to hate humanity, either directly or indirectly.
See, for instance, pages 154-5. Paying attention to this passage but also
making use of evidence from other parts of the book, explain/argue to us how we
should interpret Abbey’s apparent misanthropy, and why? Should we take him
literally? Metaphorically? A mixture of both? What does this misanthropy
ultimately mean?
In many places throughout the
narrative, Abbey expresses both compassion and loathing towards his fellow
humans. He decries human progress and
development, as they seem to be bent on the destruction of his beloved natural
world. At other times, however, he seems
to genuinely enjoy the company of those around him, and even goes as far as
expressing sympathy towards the plights of humans, describing them as victims
being cheated by society. He recognizes
this juxtaposition, which confuses him.
Among the primary sources of his misanthropy is his resentment towards
faculties within himself beaten into him by humanity via the process of
socialization. This does not necessarily
mean that he does not recognize that this is an ordeal to which every
individual within the society is subjected.
In summary, Abbey’s “misanthropy” is directed primarily at human
behavior, and at the ways in which individuals arrange and stratify themselves,
and is not directed towards the individuals themselves.
Abbey’s deep ambivalence towards
humanity is most clearly expressed in the chapter “Down the River,” in which he
and a companion raft down the Colorado River.
The chapter begins with yet another tirade regarding the destruction of
Glen Canyon and the creation of Lake Powell.
He expresses admiration of Major Powell and “his brave men [who] once
lined the rapids and glided through silent canyons,” (152) and points out the
irony of the man-made lake, which Abbey views as an abomination, being named
after such a man. Upon feeling elated
drifting down the river with his companion, Abbey mentions feeling a peculiar
kinship with Powell, as well as Mark Twain.
This is a stark contrast from the opening diatribe. He expresses his contentment with the
“companionship and ease of conversation” (154) that he experiences with Ralph
Newcomb.
Another instance in which Abbey demonstrates compassions towards his
fellow man can be found in the chapter “Polemic: Industrial Tourism and the
National Parks.” He describes the
motorized tourists as the primary victims of industrial tourism, who “endure
patiently the most prolonged discomforts,” ranging from “awful food of park
cafeterias and roadside eateries,” and “the smell of exhaust fumes.” (51) Abbey
acknowledges that this is the only kind of excursion available to these people,
and that they are in fact being deprived by the industrialized and
profit-driven nature of modern tourism.
He doesn’t resent them as individuals, and in the case of the tourist from
Cleveland, will actually take the time to exchange views in a surprisingly
non-contentious manner. I think it’s
fair to say that Abbey has clearly demonstrated understanding, contrary to the
misanthropic attitude in which he is frequently immersed. In “Down the River,” Abbey relates feeling “a
wave of love for [Newcomb].” (155).
These clearly aren’t the words of a misanthrope. Abbey can be just enthralled with human
contact as any of us. The only problem
he has is with incessant human development, and the manner in which society so
insidiously enslaves us, e.g. “degrading jobs, the insufferable arrogance of
elected officials, the crafty cheating and the slimy advertising of
businessmen…the constant petty tyranny of automatic washers and automobiles and
TV machines and telephones—,” (155) etc.
This is an agreeable argument, maybe because it is wise an because I also made it in my paper a bit. abbey always lives in the question, and he loves to create the dualities your essay keenly points out. You describe quotes in detail, which is good. You don't just throw one at us for the sake of throwing it, you dive in as well. the only big flaw that this essay has is the lack of support for the final quote andd a conclusion after that. I am left hanging a bit, wondering how all this thinking will come to a head eventually. It was good however that in the last paragraph you did say that Abbey hates the whole, not all the parts of humanity. This is a big distinction, one that I forgot to make in my first essay. Overall, a good collection of thoughts are presented here, just their order and sum might be yet to be fully established,
ReplyDeleteCapitalize Abbey in sentence 2 and the in sentence 5. And add a period at the end. My bad!
ReplyDeleteou potentially have several arguments in the first paragraph. All are interesting, but you slide too easily from one idea to the next without pause. Socialization isn't the same thing as "human behavior" which is not the same thing as stratification. An attack on human hierarchies is likely to be distinct from an attack on the socialization process, vs. human behavior more broadly. What's your real focus?
ReplyDeleteI'm not sure what you want us to take away in the 2nd paragraph. I think you're getting at Abbey's admiration for particular individuals (those he knows personally as well as those he only knows intellectually), but this could be clarified, especially in relationship to your 1st paragraph.
Then, at the end, you have an opportunity to bring it all together a little bit, but you don't quite do it. He loves Newcomb and he hates development. This isn't nearly as controlled as it could/should be - you're exposing some of Abbey's ambiguities, but you haven't done much to pin down what he loves or hates, or how we ultimately resolve that ambiguity. In short, this is underdeveloped even though you clearly have a strong general grasp of Abbey's ambiguities.