Ryan Cooley
September 16, 2014
Seminar in Composition
Adam Johns
Abbey and Misanthropy
What sparked Abbey to write Desert
Solitaire? Was it to fill his need for adventure or just a desire to live
with nature? Either points could be argued but I find this novel as a personal
letter from Abbey to society that says ‘you all are going to kill each other.’
While that sounds harsh at first, let me explain. I believe the whole reason
this book exists is because Abbey got sick of his life amongst the mass
population and decided to live amongst nature and he found his new life to be
so satisfying that he decided to write a book on it. During the writing of this
book he became so passionate about what he was writing every time he was
reminded about the world outside his bubble, he became very defensive in his
writing, as displayed in when the corporate representatives visited him in the
chapter “Industrial Tourism and National Parks.” I interpret Abbey to practice,
mistrust and near hatred in humanity, characteristics of a misanthropists and
these characteristics should be taken literally in his writing.
Before I necessarily delve into the
book I would like to share some information I found on Abbey and his personal life.
His father, Paul Abbey, was; a strong socialist, anarchist, and atheist and his
mother, Mildred Abbey, who had an affection for nature too. Clearly, he grew up
to be quite the combination of his parents and as a child, he was an
“intimidating loner” (citation), making it clear he was never one to mingle
with a crowd. In 1945, he was drafted into the Army but as a result of the G.I.
Bill, he was honorably discharged to go to college, though during his time in
the forces he was demoted twice due to opposing authority. Ever since his
discharge it was noted that he gained a distrust in large institutions and the
government. The portion of his life that sticks out the most to me is that he
sent his discharge papers back to the FBI and they claimed he committed an act
of civil disobedience, putting Abbey on FBI’s watch-list. His response to the
FBI was “I’d be insulted if
they weren’t watching me” (Wendell).
As a person Abbey clearly did not
appreciate the company of fellow men and while in the book he does not single
out people to hate, he always seems to attack civilization and what the
collective whole of America is doing to the planet. This trend continues in
“Down the River” in which he claims that as a civilization if we destroy the
environment we will be “betraying the principle of civilization itself” (pg.
169, Abbey) because to him civilization does not need to move forward but
instead take a step back and appreciate the land they stay on. One famous
example of someone who followed a code like Abbey’s is Christopher McCandless,
the person who inspired the book Into the Wild by Jon Krakauer. In this
true story, McCandless selfishly ditches the fortunate life he was given to
live totally in the wild – where he went wrong is that over the past
generations, we have been trained to rely on modern technology, no longer can
someone just run away and hope live in solitary. While I do not believe Abbey
is asking everyone to drop everything and live like McCandless tried too but as
the years pass it becomes increasingly difficult to argue on the side of Abbey.
Due to his ignorance Abbey seems to have lost compassion for people and the
growth of humanity as a whole, instead he would rather have us regress into a
primitive mindset.
Even though I believe this book spawned from
Abbey’s will to get away from man, throughout his story, Abbey interacts with
many different characters where no one is like the other; his boss, tourists,
Roy, Viviano and Newcomb. As a story, naturally I would think that Abbey would
find things about these characters that would allow him to grow as a person
too, instead I see no rub-off from these characters. Abbey has been the same
character since page one. But I have found an anomaly in his character that
makes the reader, for a moment, more sympathetic, he claims he misses society
but not the big city but “society of a friend or friends or a good, friendly
woman” (pg. 97, Abbey), this is a step. Also, in the midst of my minor rant on
Abbey and his beliefs, I realize that for many problems he poses, he proposes a
solution. Solutions like the six-step solution of industrialism in national
parks and his solution to overdevelopment on page 131. So he tries nicely to
point out problems and offer solutions, though they seem weak, unpopular and answer
problems that even forty years later are not huge problems.
The most
glaring part of Edward Abbey is his clear distrust in humanity and hatred for
what it has done to the planet. Everyone has their redeemable qualities and he
is no exception but there clear evidence that he loves the national park system
because he is not a fan of people and in fact is quite a misanthropists.
Works CIted:
Abbey, Edward. Desert
Solitaire; a Season in the Wilderness. New York: McGraw-Hill, 1968. Print
Wendell, Roger J.
"Edward Abbey and Henry David Thoreau Page of Roger J. Wendell." Edward
Abbey and Henry David Thoreau Page of Roger J. Wendell. Roger J Wenedell,
n.d. Web. 17 Sept. 2014. <http://www.rogerwendell.com/abbey.html>.
"Edward Abbey." Encyclopedia of Biograhpies. N.p., n.d. Web.
17 Sept. 2014.
<http://www.notablebiographies.com/supp/Supplement-A-Bu-and-Obituaries/Abbey-Edward.html>.
Ryan, I think your essay is overall well written and it states an argument that flows through your essay. I found that your argument was in the last sentence of the first paragraph, "I interpret Abbey to practice, mistrust and near hatred in humanity, characteristics of a misanthropists[...],". I enjoyed the way you interpreted the prompt and the direction you took.I really liked the addition of the background history of Abbey's father and mother. I think it gives us a better understanding of Abbeys views and the reason of his specific viewpoints. I also enjoyed the comparison between Abbey and Christopher McCandless. While those other sources were very helpful, I think you need more analysis from the book and Abbey's experiences. I would also add additional analysis in your second to last paragraph where you start talking about his six solutions of industrialism in national parks. If you took one of his six solutions and elaborated on it, it would have supported your argument even more. Overall, I think your essay was great and kept me wanting to read more! Good job!
ReplyDeleteYour intro is a little long to say what it says. Your research is *correct*, as far as it goes, but I'm not yet sure what you're trying to do with it.
ReplyDeleteTake this line: "As a person Abbey clearly did not appreciate the company of fellow men and while in the book he does not single out people to hate, he always seems to attack civilization and what the collective whole of America is doing to the planet." How does this follow from your research? The facts you've researched - that Abbey seems to have inherited some degree of political radicalism from his father - don't seem to have anything to do with a hatred of humanity. You need to connect the one to the other.
I'm not sure what you're doing with your reference to "Into the Wild." There are similarities, yes, but there are also differences - but your specific strategy is unclear. How does the fact that McCandless went overboard prove that Abbey, too, went overboard, when you haven't done anything with the details of either book? For instance, take this line: "As a person Abbey clearly did not appreciate the company of fellow men and while in the book he does not single out people to hate, he always seems to attack civilization and what the collective whole of America is doing to the planet." - you are supporting this only with assumptions, not with detailed evidence.
The claim that Abbey-as-character hasn't changed is interesting. I'm not sure that you're wrong, but I think this is a bad argument to make unless you're prepared to engage, at the very least, with Newcomb's character - after all, Abbey is in the apparent ironic position of *sharing misanthropy* with him.
Overall: For the most part, your paragraphs and ideas don't connect with one another. Your positions are clear, but it's not clear why you hold them, or why we should hold them. It's not even clear what purpose your research serves.