Jayani Muniappan
Week 3 Prompt 3
Throughout the entirety of this memoir
Abbey utilizes pieces of writing from a multitude of genres to emphasize his argument.
He effectively integrates quotes from poetry and drama into his writing to make
his memoir more operative. There are many examples of where Abbey quotes other
literary works and through this essay I will be focusing upon two specific ones.
In the chapter Cowboys and Indians Part
II, Abbey refers to William Blake’s Evening
Star.
“Thou fair hair'd angel of the evening,
Now, while the sun rests on the
mountains light,
Thy bright torch of love; Thy radiant
crown
Put on, and smile upon our evening bed!
Smile on our loves…”
Through
this poem, Blake is conveying the notion that stars bring peace and direction
to society during the generally hostile night. Blake utilizes metaphors to associate
the star to a "fair-haired angel." This metaphor expresses the
shining star as a beautiful goddess who looks over the people during the dark
night. Blake also calls the star a bright torch of love, which conveys a beaming
and heroic quality to the star. In To the Evening Star, Blake successfully portrays how
elements of nature come together to create a beautiful, perfect situation. The
star glows luminously, the wind gently blows, and the lake mirrors the light.
These three actions come together to produce a beautiful scenery which humans can
take advantage of every night. It is this concept, which I felt Abbey was attracted
to. This poem portrays nature as a guide, a protector a hero. His use of this
specific passage from the poem highlights his idea that nature is a force that
aids society. He is able to subtly show his misanthropy towards the part of
society that destroys nature through this passage. He’s is indirectly conveying
the idea that humans who destroy nature are destroying themselves, because nature
is only a mechanism that aids the society.
The second
example that I would like to focus upon would be from Down the River. Abbey
integrates a verse of a Tigua Indian tribe’s song.
“My home
over there,
Now I
remember it;
And when I
see it that mountain far away
Why then I
weep,
Why then I
weep,
Remembering
my home.”
The Tigua
Indians are one of the few tribes that still live in the Southwest. They named
their ancestral home Pueblo Gran Quivera. It was north of El Paso. It was
started sometime in 800 AD, but by the early 1300’s it was one of the largest
towns. The Indians lived peacefully for some time, but in the 1600s Spaniards
came and established settlements around the Tigua’s homes. With them, they
brought not only unwarranted authority but also diseases and epidemics that
caused loss of many Tigua Indian lives. More bad luck found this tribe in the
the 1670s, when a drought struck the area for many years. By 1675 the Indians
were so desperate that they had to leave their home behind. The Gran Quivera
was forcefully left behind. The song that Abbey quotes is a way for the Tigua to
remember the home of their ancestors and pay their respects to all the lives
that were lost. Abbey integrates this specific song, because he is able to show
all that is lost with the actions of human kind. He uses this literary work as
a loose comparison to what is happening to our wildlife. The wildlife is the
Tigua and humans are the Spaniards. The wildlife exists peacefully on its own.
It doesn’t bother anything or anyone, it’s just there, like the Tigua Indians. But
as soon as the Spanish came and interfered with the lives of the Tigua, everything
took a turn for the worst, just like society. As soon as society interfered with
the wildlife and nature in general, everything good about nature was slowly
being taken away. Abbey sheds bright light on the fat that by trying to change
nature we are slowly causing it to deteriorate.
In
conclusion, Abbey has found a way to use the works of others to support his
views. He could’ve just stated his ideas, but he takes the extra step to use the
work of other authors. Why? Personally I believe that the use of other literary
works not only strengthens his argument but also shows Abbey’s literary skill.
He is able to integrate seemingly unrelated ideas into evidence for his claims.
The use of the different genres allows for connections between different pieces
of works and allows the reader to think more deeply about to the memoir.
Bibliography
Abbey, E. (1971). Desert Solitaire: A Season in
the Wilderness . Ballatine Books .
Emily's Poetry Blog . (2013 , S trieved from
http://emilyspoetryblog.com/2013/09/13/to-the-evening-star-by-william-blake/
Moore, R. E. (2012). The Tigua Indians of Texas.
Retrieved from The Tigua Indians of Texas:
http://www.texasindians.com/tigua.htm
Both of your examples are reasonable, and I think you're moving in a reasonable direction with both. I think it was a mistake, though, to use two examples rather than one. You need to spend too much effort simply explaining the basics of the poem and the song, which leaves you (between the two of them) little space left to really work through what they do for Abbey *in context*.
ReplyDeleteIf you had focused on one rather than two you could have done more with the context in which Abbey uses either work, as well as thinking more about the tragic dimensions of the song (which you hint at), or maybe done a little more research into Blake broadly speaking (Blake saw himself as a kind of prophet - if anyone was ever a mystic, it was him).
This is a case where less is more, certainly.