Emma Sullivan
Seminar in Composition
Dr. Adam Johns
14 November 2014
What do the manager at McDonald’s, the
line leader of a kindergarten class, and your mayor all have in common? Simply put, they’re all ranked in some way in
accordance with the hierarchical structure that characterizes the world as we
know it. Each have people above them, below them, controlling them, affecting
them—they’re part of the grandiose classified scheme of our society. And where
would we be without it? What if we completely did away with rankings,
categorizations, and classifications of any sort, would we really be better
off? Author Octavia Butler offers an insight into what a world might be like
without this system, an insight into a society that identifies our hierarchical
nature as precisely the downfall of society. However, while simultaneously taking
this example into consideration, we are now faced with the question of whether
or not hierarchy is the downfall of our society,
or if society would even be ours without
it.
In order to begin examining this
question, it is essential to examine a few key places we see it on a larger
scale, and what the Oankali do to offset the need for it. Take the example of
governmental structure. No two countries run their governments exactly alike,
for if they did they would hardly be considered unique entities. Regardless of
whether a nation chooses dictatorship or democracy, government is inarguably
the largest-scale paradigm of hierarchy in our world, and for this reason is at
the root of global-scale conflict. In this way, it innately creates a power
struggle and competition within and between countries. Of this issue, Paul H.
Rubin Professor of Economics and Law at Emory University says, “Everyone in a
society must be subject to the government hierarchy,” and therefore government
creates a sort of umbrella over all the people populating a land (Rubin 269). With
this principle comes resistance among those whom are part of a particular
nation, take for example the American Civil War; this was a governmental
conflict within a single country having to do with flaws in hierarchical
structure that allowed for up rise. The American people were at an acute
disagreement on the principle of slavery and how the government should regulate
it, which was fundamentally a matter of personal principle and morals, as well
as economic factors. Since all people in the nation are governed as a singular
hierarchy, this discord ultimately resulted in war.
Since the 1800s surely America has come a
long way to avoid internal conflicts like these, and in doing so we have put
forward a seemingly strong yet ultimately ineffective system-- otherwise known
as checks and balances with the reasoning that one branch of government should
never have complete dominance over the other. We try to check and balance on a
global scale as well, while some countries have more valuable resources or
money than others, it is essentially our varying inequalities that equalize our
world. Although this concept sounds paradoxical at first, suppose a country
(country A) has abundant resources and bad soil, and another country (country
B) has minimal resources and quality soil ideal for growing crops that are not
indigenous to country A. Then, these two countries have a sort of check and
balance system that should be
preventing one from becoming dominant over the other. However, in actuality the
politics between countries are hardly ever as simple as merely this trade
aspect, and the delicate balance is ultimately unachievable. The current problem
we face is that many nations are either wealthy or poor, with no substantial in
between to balance out power. The same goes for economic systems in America,
with the root cause of all of this being hierarchy.
Now that we have briefly examined
the prevalence of hierarchy within the human race through a sort of modern day
lens, it is now essential to take a look at how the Oankali avoid this.
Hierarchy is the characteristic that they find to be most problematic in our
society, with these feelings are best summed up be Jdhaya stating of his people
that, “We’re not hierarchical, you see. We never were. But we are powerfully
acquisitive. We acquire new life—seek it, investigate it, manipulate it, sort
it, use it,” (Butler 41). To sum up what the Oankali believe is to say that
instead of being power acquisitive as
we seem to be (due to our hierarchical nature), they are knowledge acquisitive. As a society, they do not seek to obtain
power individually, but rather they wish to move forward as one body in the acquisition
of new life, and with this new life, knowledge. We see this through the Oankali
treatment of humans. Their primary focus is to understand them, and through
this understanding they gain power as one body, not separate divisions. Jdhaya
even goes so far as to give Lilith an insight into the future when the Oankali
and humans will essential morph together and explain that, “Your hierarchical
tendencies will be modified and if we learn to regenerate limbs and reshape our
bodies we’ll share those abilities with you That’s part of the trade. We’re
overdue for it.” (Butler 42). Although these intentions may not be as innocent
as the Oankali would like them to appear, they are character of their idea of
knowledge as a form of currency, and an item valuable enough for trade.
The Oankali also exhibit a gender
system that truly adheres to the principles behind checks and balances. The
males, females, and ooli, all play different roles in reproduction and general
Oankali duties, roles that prevent one from necessarily being considered more
powerful than the other—perhaps what a check and balance is supposed to be like.
This starkly contrasts with the gender roles we see in society today, which are
a hierarchy in and of itself. Although there is surely more awareness of
inequality, and a push for women and men to be viewed and treated as equals,
the stereotypes we experience today have been paved by centuries of history.
From this, we can take a look at two different hierarchies that Rubin lays out
for us. The first being “dominance hierarchies” (sometimes referred to as
“consumption” or “allocation hierarchies”), these being systems that are,
“evolutionarily old and predate humanness,” (Rubin 260). Thus, these
hierarchies are homologous to those seen in the wild. The second type of
hierarchy Rubin mentions is a “production hierarchy”, which encompasses many
productive human activities, such as the running of a business (Rubin 260). In
an allocation hierarchical sense, gender inequality has existed for centuries, as
seen through the differing gender roles in the animal kingdom. In a production
hierarchical sense, these inequalities occur as a symptom of their historical
roots in allocation hierarchies. The Oankali avoid a hierarchy in this sense
due to the fact that they do not posses hierarchical roots, and therefore have
no need for production hierarchy due to their priority of knowledge and lack of
evolutionary hierarchical roots. These innate differences in how the Oankali
treat and avoid possible opportunities for inequality are at the foreground of
what characterizes the two societies.
Now that we’ve examined some ways in
which the Oankali and humans deal with hierarchy, or lack there of, we can
begin to examine whether or not hierarchy is the downfall of our society as the
Oankali believe it to be. On one hand, it is the cause of humanity’s self-destruction
in the fictional novel. However, in reality we have yet to come too close to
this extreme. Although many contend that is we continue down such a maliciously
hierarchical path, humanity is sure to be doomed, I believe that we will never
evolve out of our biologically innate “dominance hierarchical” roots. They are
the common denominator amongst the animal kingdom, and characterize the living
world. Would them could we even call it our
world? What would humans live for?
Most of us live to work towards a certain
goal. Whether said goal is to fulfill a passion and become known for it, or
work our way up in a production hierarchy, achievements are what motivate us to
be at our best. Undoubtedly for some, this means also being their worst, and
cheating in order to get to the top quickly. It is perhaps the corruption that
lies within and comes from these people that the fatal flaws of our society show
themselves. These undesirable characteristics are where the Oankali find fault
in our world, yet at the same time they lack something that all humans are born
with—a drive to succeed, passion, and individuality. No person is born with
aspirations to fail, and this is why our concept of hierarchy is a necessary
for success. Compared to the Oankali characters that we have met, no single
Oankali male, female, or ooli seems to be particularly passionate about
anything. They have no individualistic passion because they are always focused
on their role in the whole of their society.
To sum up these ideas, I want to
highlight a trade off which I believe to be unavoidable in the face of whether
or not hierarchy is truly our downfall. This trade off being that hierarchy
ultimately comes with passion and individuality, and a lack of hierarchy comes
with a lack of the former. Personally, I believe that because of this trade
off, hierarchy cannot be our greatest down fall, but rather what makes us human
because a world without passion and individuality is a world without humanity.
Works Cited
Butler, Octavia E. Lilith's Brood. New York:
Aspect/Warner, 2000. Print.
Rubin, Paul H. "Hierarchy." Human Nature : An
Interdisciplinary Biosocial Perspective 11.3
(2000): 259-79. ProQuest. Web. 14 Nov. 2014.
I love your intro. Possibly it’s too ambitious, but I still like it just as well. The closing question is a great alternative to a conventional thesis, if you can manage to keep it in mind through the essay.
ReplyDeleteRe: your second paragraph, note also that civil wars in general, and very much ours in particular, are about who gets to be where within the hierarchy - from the issue of slavery to the question of whether agriculture or industry would be dominant in the American economy, questions of hierarchy are/were pivotal.
While I still *like* the third paragraph, I feel like in some ways you’re still introducing your actual essay - probably you could have accelerated things by a paragraph or so.
“To sum up what the Oankali believe is to say that instead of being power acquisitive as we seem to be (due to our hierarchical nature), they are knowledge acquisitive. “ That’s a great distinction - not totally obvious, but provocative and useful, for sure.
Your introduction of Rubin was a little clunky - it seems like a good approach, it’s just a question of how to handle & use this material.
“Although many contend that is we continue down such a maliciously hierarchical path, humanity is sure to be doomed, I believe that we will never evolve out of our biologically innate “dominance hierarchical” roots. “ This is an interesting thing for a vegetarian to say. Human vegetarians are pushing back at least mildly against our biology, to say nothing of our cultural history. Is it hopeless to pick these fights with our own nature? Do we do it without hope, just because it’s right? Or is there a structured way in which fighting against ourselves can actually produce a better world?
“Compared to the Oankali characters that we have met, no single Oankali male, female, or ooli seems to be particularly passionate about anything.” -- This is obviously wrong to me, although I have the benefit of having read all three books many times. What the Oankali are passionate about is family (their mates, their children) and discovery (of new life, not of new places). That doesn’t mean that you’re wrong, exactly - I think what you’re getting at is there passions are directed at accumulation (of knowledge and of children) rather than at achievement.
For me the last paragraph falls a little flat, I think because you’re focusing solely on what the Oankali lack, rather than on what they have. You thereby dodge around the more complex moral and political questions which pushed the early parts of the essay along - I feel like maybe you just stopped because you had to, and not because you had finished.
Also, I want to note that I don’t think there is a contraction (and I’m totally sure Butler doesn’t think there’s one) between the idea that hierarchy is our downfall and that it’s where our passion comes from. That’s the essence of tragedy right there - in our glory lies our doom. That’s why the Oankali find us so beautiful...