Madison Kraemer
Dr. Adam JohnsEnglish Composition 0200
15 November 2014
The Strive for a Different
Perspective on Cancer
Close your eyes and imagine
that you are walking down the street. You run into this tall, muscular, handsome
man with most beautiful blue eyes. As a female, you immediately become turned on. A tall,
muscular man with beautiful eyes are sexual characters that normally attract us to men.
To the Oankali, cancer is considered this “tall, muscular, blue eyed man”
because they view cancer as this sexual characteristic that they want and
attract from us humans. The Oankali have taken cancer, something so dangerous and lethal to us humans,
and altered it so it can be useful to their race and future generations. We
humans are investing in millions even billions of dollars to find a cure for this disease whereas
the Oankali are finding different ways to utilize it to benefit their way of
life. The Oankali transform the aspects that have destroyed our human world and
have changed them into something that can be beneficial and effective in their
quality of life.
The Oankali had the capability
and time of deeply understanding cancer because they do not believe they have a
hierarchical status like us humans. The Oankali believe that the destruction of
human life was due to our combination of intelligence and hierarchy. In the
United States, we live in a society where you are separated into classes based
on the amount of money you make and acquire. In our human society, people who
have more money, have more power politically and sociably in the world. In Lilith’s Brood, Butler sets up a type of
hierarchal status between the Oankali and ooloi that is similar to ours. Essentially,
the ooloi is the voice or “head” of the household and everyone in the household
defers to the ooloi. But it seems as if Butler gives each person in the
household a special quality or role that is significant to their name (Oankali,
ooloi, or baby ooloi) in attempts to abolish the possibility of a hierarchical
status. Butler writes how it essential to understand the true meaning on why
the Oankali want to avoid having a hierarchy at all costs; “we’re not
hierarchical, you see. We never were. But we are powerfully acquisitive. We acquire
new life-seek it, investigate it, manipulate it, sort it, use it,” (41). In
other words, instead of us humans who seek power due to hierarchical nature, the
Oankali have studied and changed this view we humans naturally acquire and use their
learned knowledge of cancer to improve their way life for future generations. The
Oankali want to stay clear of a hierarchy because they have learned that it
seems to blind our thinking which causes us to look at only the face value of
things.
Now that we have reasoning for the
Oankali’s avoidance of hierarchical status, we can explain how it relates to
cancer. As humans, we have this tendency to search for any type of solution in
hopes of getting recognized. A journal called Hierarchies, Power Inequalities’, and Organizational Corruption written
by Valerie Rosenblatt states that “Particularly, institutional environments
structured as hierarchies promoting power or status inequalities may compel
individuals and organizations to get to the top using any means possible, in
process overlooking moral norms and values,” (Rosenblatt 238). Rosenblatt’s
description of hierarchy is very similar to the way we humans think. For
example, a solution or cure for cancer is essentially a race. The first person
to find a possible solution or cure for cancer will go down in history as “the
person who cured cancer and saved millions of lives”. It seems as if human scientists
are so preoccupied and obsessed with moving up in hierarchical standings that they
forgot to deeply explore cancer in order to find multiple solutions instead of just
one. As a society, we are blinded by this urge to increase in hierarchical
status which causes us to not focus on analyzing cancer in a useful and
effective way. The Oankali have mastered this skill because they have studied
our ludicrous ways and found the ability to focus more on the research and
anatomy of the cancer instead of just one simple cure. This causes them to have
a deep motivation to find the different ways you can manipulate DNA within
themselves in order to develop a better understanding of the effects of cancer.
The Oankali have studied our
human flaws and found a much more beneficial way to treat cancer. They are open
minded and search for multiple ways in which they can use this cancer to advance
their knowledge. As humans, we solely look for one answer. We put humans into
more pain by the use of chemotherapy and radiation instead of exploring the
different possibilities that would be less harmful. Just as Valerie stated
in her journal, it seems as if we humans will do anything to find a cause even
if it means putting humans in a more harmful and destructive situation. As
humans, we need to open our eyes and realize that everything we perceive as “bad”
may not really be bad and I think this is the message Butler is trying to portray. Even though we have a good reason to think cancer is bad and deadly, we cannot
just look at the face value of everything, we need to look deep within
something to really be able to manipulate and understand the complexity of it. We
need to follow in the Oankali footsteps and acquire this type of thinking. We
must rid ourselves of hierarchy and turn something that is so deadly and lethal
into something beneficial and useful to our quality of life.
Following this belief of
changing the way we perceive cancer, we could possibly use cancer in a similar
way the Oankali do. The Oankali have taken cancer and transformed it from this
malicious, deadly disease into something savior and beneficial to their way of life. Essentially
cancer is the “holy grail” to the Oankali. Cancer can dramatically change their
appearance by transforming them from this medusa, “snakes for hair [and] nests
of night crawlers for eyes and ears,” appearance to more of a Lilith, human
like appearance. (43). The Oankali look into the future and use cancer as a way
to “[...] reshape themselves and look more like the partners before trade,” (41). It
changes them in a way where people will not be so afraid of them, but rather
they will appear to look human because it helps in the “regeneration of lost
limbs, controls malleability, […] and increases longevity,” (41). If we humans
could grasp this concept, then maybe we could eventually have the capability to
regenerate the limbs and increase longevity to help the mental stability of
humans who have lost their limbs due to war, from a car accident, or any other unfortunate
event. Cancer could be another way to improve our quality of life and even increase
our life expectancy if we just followed the Oankali way of life.
As humans,
we need to rid ourselves of this mindset that cancer is malicious and deadly. To the
Oankali, cancer is the thing that can aid your quality of life and can be very
successful and useful, whereas humans view cancer as a disease that only
destroys and kills. We need to use cancer the way the Oankali use it, open
minded and without hierarchy tendencies. Our human society needs to stop
conforming to this idea that all cancer does is destroy, and we must stop
looking at only the face value of cancer but rather deeply explore the true
meaning and understanding of cancer to further our quality of life.
Works Cited
Butler, Octavia
E. Lilith's Brood. New York: Aspect/Warner, 2000. Print.
Rosenblatt,
Valerie. "Hierarchies, Power Inequalities, and Organizational
Corruption." Journal of Business Ethics 111.2 (2013): 237-51. Web.
6 Nov. 2014.
You turned it in late, but not outrageously so. My comments will be compact. Your first few sentences were good, but there’s not enough focus in the rest of the first couple paragraphs - are you summarizing or arguing? Your use of Rosenblatt was good - I wonder if you could have gotten here more quickly?
ReplyDeleteYour own point of view does emerge: “We need to follow in the Oankali footsteps and acquire this type of thinking. We must rid ourselves of hierarchy and turn something that is so deadly and lethal into something beneficial and useful to our quality of life.” This would work better if you were more specific. Where and how (if only as an example) should we learn this lesson from Butler’s Oankali? The idea that we could use cancer if we abandoned our hierarchical tendencies seems, at best, underdeveloped. It’s very speculative, and it’s totally unclear how that works. It would be more effective to focus on ways closer to home that we could transform ourselves through an abandonment of hierarchy, and to think through the consequences of that. For example, what does a non-hierarchical classroom look like? How about a workplace? Or better yet, since you started with science, how do you do scientific research in a non or anti hierarchical way?
Overall, this shows some insight into Butler and alignment with her thinking, but it remains vague and abstract.
Emma read both of the essays I was starting to revise and said I should choose this one rather than Lewontin. She thought that I had a good understanding but reading the rest of the book would really give me more material to work on. She also told me that I should incorporate more aspects of hierarchy, which I did. I took all her thoughts into consideration but the only problem I had was time. I was not able to read all three books but I was able to incorporate more hierarchy into my revision and I think it strengthened it from my previous essay.
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